After learning how the women’s restrooms on campus did not have easy access to period products or other sanitary devices, we as a group want to take action. Our campaign's objective is to change the university policy on the distribution of female products on campus. We believe it should be a requirement on all campuses, especially here at SLU that women have the basic necessities when it comes to their periods. Our main goal is to start a media campaign that brings awareness and educates our community on female health. Our first objective is to solve the issue here at SLU regarding sanitary bins and access to pads and tampons within female restrooms.
We were inspired by the period movement created by Nadya Okamoto
https://www.period.org
Julia Dani Zee Rodrigo
On two separate occasions, the objective of your campaign is stated. What is the true objective of your campaign? Also keep them together and either move the goal to the end or before stating the objective, to make the post more fluid. Last sentence needs additional commas and the removal of an and, after bins. Keep up the good work!
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